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Akvile and Ben
It's legit!
Stock images don't look authentic. Actual images take more time.
Bad reviews improve conversion by 67%
Exact numbers look more legit
Will
****
Good questions!
Loss is twice as powerful as gain
Dean Melissa
****
Putting others' interests ahead of yours.
YOU do deserve better instead I build the best websites
Arguing against your self interest is a credibility booster (nice case study).
Good examples!
Josh Mark
***
Body language a bit close, slides slightly crammed
Good examples though (Outlook, FB)
Press it and see what happens
*****
Jennifer Joe
Get to the point with fewer words.
- Use active voice
- Get read of meaningless words
- Get rid of repeated words
- Make sure it reads OK
Excellent: good vs bad examples on the same slide, progressively enhancing a sentence!