Update commissioning.tex

Co-authored-by: Phil Marshall <[email protected]>

Author: leannep

commissioning.tex

@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@ \subsection{Commissioning Plan and Schedule}
 Both the System Optimization and Science Validation (SV) phases will be carried out with LSSTCam. 
 The System Optimization phase will collect a set of observations designed to help optimize the system prior to starting the Science Validation phase.
 During the Science Validation phase, a series of SV Surveys designed to support scientific analyses that validate the system's performance and allow Rubin to demonstrate operational readiness will be carried out.
-Both the System Optimization and SV phases contain a number of planned key components, which currently include an LSST wide-fast-deep (WFD) 1--2 year equivalent depth ``pilot'' survey and a 
+The System Optimization and SV phases contain a number of planned key components, which currently include an LSST wide-fast-deep (WFD) 1--2 year equivalent depth ``pilot'' survey and a 
 10+~year ``ugrizy'' depth test in three fields covering 100~sq. deg.
 In all phases, field selection will be carried out by the commissioning team, taking into account a wide variety of constraints as well as a ``menu'' of science opportunities to which the Rubin Science Community has contributed.
 See Section 6 of \citeds{SITCOMTN-005} for the baseline design of the SV surveys.