be friendlier

Author: nikomatsakis

posts/2021-04-14-async-vision-doc-shiny-future.md

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 When writing "shiny future" stories, the goal is to focus on the **experience** of Rust's users first and foremost, and not so much on the specific technical details. In fact, you don't even have to know exactly how the experience will be achieved. We have a few years to figure that out, after all. 🚀
 
-Every "shiny future" story is a "retelling" of one or more "status quo" stories. The idea is to replay the same scenario but hopefully with a happier ending, as a result of the improvements we've made. If you don't see a "status quo" story that is right for telling your "shiny future" story, though, that's no problem! Just write it now! We are still requesting "status quo" and "shiny future" stories, and we will do so right up until the end. 
+Every "shiny future" story is a "retelling" of one or more "status quo" stories. The idea is to replay the same scenario but hopefully with a happier ending, as a result of the improvements we've made. If you don't see a "status quo" story that is right for telling your "shiny future" story, though, that's no problem! Write up your story and we'll figure out the "status quo" story it addresses (or write a new one). We are still requesting "status quo" and "shiny future" stories, and we will do so right up until the end.
 
 If you'd like to see what a "shiny future" story looks like, we have merged one example, [Barbara Makes a Wish](https://rust-lang.github.io/wg-async-foundations/vision/shiny_future/barbara_makes_a_wish.html). This story describes Barbara's experiences using a nifty new tool that gives her lots of information about the state of her async executor. It is a "retelling" of the "status quo" story [Barbara Wants Async Insights](https://rust-lang.github.io/wg-async-foundations/vision/status_quo/barbara_wants_async_insights.html).