Update guide-create-multiconsent.mdx

Updated based on peer review feedback

Author: racene-swan

docs/topics/users/consent/guide-create-multiconsent.mdx

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 # Create a multi-consent
 
-The `CreateMultiConsent` mutation allows you to combine multiple individual consents for sensitive operations into a single consent. This enables your user to authorize several operations simultaneously, enhancing user experience by reducing the number of individual consent prompts. You can merge up to 100 individual consents into a single mutation.
+The `CreateMultiConsent` mutation allows you to combine multiple individual consents for sensitive operations into a single consent. This allows your users to approve several sensitive operations simultaneously, reducing the number of consent prompts and improving their experience. You can merge up to 100 individual consents into a single mutation.
 
 ## Guide {#guide}