From b6197fc46f14cc20c01c522e208af0b235c1ee8f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: simoneonofri <simone@w3.org>
Date: Sat, 18 May 2024 17:05:02 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] [wg/fedid] Update Deliverables

Changes:
* Cosmetics and Proofread
---
 2024/wg-fedid.html | 6 +++---
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/2024/wg-fedid.html b/2024/wg-fedid.html
index 74ff709..0bf522d 100644
--- a/2024/wg-fedid.html
+++ b/2024/wg-fedid.html
@@ -199,7 +199,7 @@ <h2>
         Deliverables
       </h2>
 
-      <p>Updated document status is available on the <a href="https://www.w3.org/groups/wg/fedid/publications">group
+      <p>The updated document status is available on the <a href="https://www.w3.org/groups/wg/fedid/publications">group
           publication status page</a>.</p>
 
       <p><i>Draft state</i> indicates the state of the deliverable at the time of the charter approval.
@@ -231,8 +231,8 @@ <h3>
           </dt>
           <dd>
             <p>This specification defines an API to inform the Web Application of their user's
-              login status, so that other Web APIs can operate with this additional signal. Currently a separate
-            chapter in the <a href="#fedcm">FedCM specification</a>, the goal is to publish it as a separate deliverable to be used by
+              login status, so that other Web APIs can operate with this additional signal. Currently, it is a separate
+            chapter in the <a href="#fedcm">FedCM specification</a>, and the goal is to publish it as a separate deliverable to be used by
             <abbr title="Federated Credential Management">FedCM</abbr>.</p>
 
             <p class="draft-status"><b>Draft state:</b> <a href="https://github.com/fedidcg/FedCM">Adopted from the