clean up readme wording

README.md

@@ -9,11 +9,11 @@ An adapter between slipstream telemetry and honeycomb events
 [Honeycomb](https://www.honeycomb.io/) is an observability tool with a sweet
 query interface and distributed tracing support.
 
-At NFIBrokerage, we :heart: honeycomb because it empowers us to debug issues in
+At NFIBrokerage, we :heart: honeycomb because it enables us to debug issues in
 fractions of time (and with far more certainty) than log ingestion services,
 and lets us understand our system in real-time.
 
-For example, it was almost comically fast to debug this issue:
+For example, it was gloriously fast to debug this issue:
 [NFIBrokerage/slipstream#12](https://github.com/NFIBrokerage/slipstream/issues/12)
 because of the telemetry support added in 0.3 and this exporter library.