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📝 WalkthroughWalkthroughAsynchronous LLM calls now support process-local and host-local admission control. The change adds FIFO queuing, concurrency and call limits, cancellation handling, telemetry, multiprocess coordination, validation experiments, and documentation. ChangesLLM admission control
Priority: ➖ Normal Estimated code review effort: 5 (Critical) | ~90 minutes Change: Feature · Severity of issue fixed: Medium Sequence Diagram(s)sequenceDiagram
participant Application
participant UnifiedLLM
participant AdmissionController
participant LLMProvider
Application->>UnifiedLLM: start asynchronous call
UnifiedLLM->>AdmissionController: acquire before provider attempt
AdmissionController-->>UnifiedLLM: return permit or admission error
UnifiedLLM->>LLMProvider: execute provider attempt
LLMProvider-->>UnifiedLLM: return response
UnifiedLLM->>AdmissionController: release permit
UnifiedLLM-->>Application: return result
Merge Risk: 🔵 Low · up to Custom admission observers can receive duplicate outcomes and callers can see an incorrect broker admission error. The lease is recovered, so this is bounded, but isolate observer failures before merging. 🚥 Pre-merge checks | ✅ 3 | ❌ 2❌ Failed checks (2 warnings)
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In `@experiments/llm_admission_control/validate.py`:
- Line 314: Update the multiprocess startup flow around _process_worker and
start_event so each child reports readiness after reaching its wait point; have
the parent wait for readiness from both workers before calling
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In `@src/nooa/unifiedllm/admission.py`:
- Around line 128-129: Replace repeated queued-state scans in
_queued_count_locked and _AdmissionGroup.acquire with a maintained queued-waiter
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- Line 441: Apply the remaining queue deadline to asyncio.open_connection in
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🟡 Minor · Record unavailable admission outcomes in both telemetry paths.
src/nooa/runtime/harness_metrics.py:825-866
📐 Maintainability & Code Quality | 🟡 Minor | ⚡ Quick winRecord unavailable admission outcomes in both telemetry paths.
BrokerAdmissionController.acquireraisesAdmissionUnavailableErrorfor broker closure, invalid responses, and transport failures, but those branches re-raise without calling_observe. The failure therefore reaches neither thellm.queuetrace event nor aggregate metrics. The harness dispatch also has no"unavailable"branch, so any controller that emits this outcome would still be omitted from aggregate metrics. Add the unavailable observation in the broker failure path and map it to an admission-unavailable/error metric.🤖 Prompt for AI Agents
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Addressed the follow-up availability-telemetry finding in f4c1bea. Broker protocol failures, shutdowns, invalid responses, and transport failures now emit an unavailable admission observation before raising. Harness metrics count and export these as harness.llm_queue.unavailable_errors. Coverage includes invalid credentials, queued broker shutdown, stale connection failure, and aggregate metric export. Validation: 153 focused tests passed; full suite 7,997 passed, 9 skipped, 3 xfailed; all pre-commit hooks passed. |
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🟠 Major · Enforce loopback-only broker binding or add TLS.
src/nooa/unifiedllm/broker_admission.py:664-688
🔒 Security & Privacy | 🟠 Major | ⚡ Quick winSensitive Data Exposure
Reachability: External
Exploitability: Moderate
CWE: CWE-319 — Cleartext Transmission of Sensitive InformationEnforce loopback-only broker binding or add TLS.
AdmissionBrokerpasses the uncheckedhosttoasyncio.start_server(). Controllers send the bearer token as plaintext JSON overasyncio.open_connection(). A non-loopback broker therefore allows an on-path client to capture and reuse the token, hold leases, and consume shared admission capacity. The documented contract describes this broker as host-local, so reject non-loopback hosts at construction unless transport protection is added.🤖 Prompt for AI Agents
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Addressed the major loopback/TLS finding in 113455e. AdmissionBroker now accepts only numeric loopback IP addresses, and BrokerAdmissionConfig enforces the same invariant so direct config construction cannot send bearer credentials off-host. Wildcard, non-loopback, hostname, empty, and non-string hosts are rejected; IPv4 127/8 and IPv6 ::1 remain supported. The host-local/no-TLS boundary is now documented. Validation: 164 focused tests passed; full suite 8,008 passed, 9 skipped, 3 xfailed; all pre-commit hooks passed. |
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🟡 Minor · Isolate observer failures from protocol exception translation.
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🎯 Functional Correctness | 🟡 Minor | ⚡ Quick winIsolate observer failures from protocol exception translation.
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broker_admission.py:511,_observe()runs beforeleased = Trueand insideacquire()'s protocol exception handlers. ATimeoutErrororOSErrorfrom the observer can therefore trigger a second observation with"timeout"or"unavailable"and then becomeAdmissionTimeoutErrororAdmissionUnavailableError.asyncio.CancelledErroralso triggers a second"cancelled"observation.The existing cleanup is safe: because
leasedremains false,finallycloses the writer, and the broker returns the lease when it detects EOF. This is not a permit leak. Isolate observer exceptions while preserving this cleanup path, and add tests for observerTimeoutErrorandOSError.🤖 Prompt for AI Agents
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Addressed the outside-diff observer exception finding in 2cb0b19. Observer execution is now outside protocol exception translation, so observer-raised TimeoutError, OSError, and CancelledError propagate unchanged, produce no duplicate outcome, and still close the unleased connection so broker capacity is returned. Regression coverage includes immediate admission for all three exception classes plus RuntimeError, and a call-cap observer failure to ensure it is not reclassified. Validation: 69 admission tests passed in three consecutive runs; both synthetic end-to-end experiments passed; all hooks and type checks passed; full suite: 8,017 passed, 9 skipped, 325 deselected, 3 xfailed. |
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A design question that came out of reviewing this: could admission control be a wrapper around a client instead of a construction-time property of base_llm = get_llm("my_llm")
controlled_llm = AdmissionControl(base_llm, AdmissionControlConfig(...))
agent = MyAgent(llm=controlled_llm)What the runtime actually needs from an A wrapper would avoid three problems by construction rather than by validation:
It would also leave The broker-internal issues are independent of where the feature is wired in and would still need fixing: |
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Implemented the wrapper direction in The public shape is now: base_llm = get_llm_client("my_llm")
controlled_llm = AdmissionControl(
base_llm,
AdmissionControlConfig(max_in_flight=4, queue_timeout=30),
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agent = MyAgent(llm=controlled_llm)Key changes:
Validation completed: 8,947 full-suite tests passed; 111 focused admission/broker/registry tests passed; changed-file pre-commit hooks passed; both synthetic gateway experiments passed; and the CI-equivalent Gitleaks scan found no leaks. |
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Thanks for updating! Looks good to me! |
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why was this necessary? How does this interact with admission control?
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@sklinglernv - This type widening was intended to reflect the existing message shapes passed through LLMCallContext; it is not required for admission control. Admission is applied by the client wrapper at each provider attempt, independently of these snapshot helpers. I’ll remove the unrelated annotation and cast changes from this PR, while retaining the llm_queue metrics bridge, which is admission-specific. Thanks for the feedback.
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@sklinglernv I removed the snapshot-helper type changes you flagged; they weren’t needed for admission control. The only actor.py change remaining is the admission metrics hook. Would you mind taking another look when you have a chance?
Signed-off-by: Clement Pakkam Isaac <cpakkamisaac@nvidia.com>
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What does this PR do?
Adds opt-in, application-scoped admission control for asynchronous LLM provider attempts.
AdmissionControl(base_llm, AdmissionControlConfig(...))as a per-use wrapper.UnifiedLLMconstructors and the model registry remain unchanged.The application owns run identity, coordinator lifecycle, capacity policy, and controller distribution. NOOA owns the provider-attempt hook, permit lifecycle, errors, and observations.
The built-in broker is host-local, not a multi-node distributed limiter. Synchronous
call()is unchanged. Real inference-gateway and multi-node validation remain follow-up work.Related issues
Closes #348
Validation
uv run --no-sync pytest -q: 8,947 passed, 9 skipped, 325 deselected, 3 expected failures.Checklist