docs: improve grammar and flow in blog/elysia-07.md #691
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WalkthroughEditorial refinements to the Elysia blog post including grammar corrections, terminology standardization (WebSocket capitalization, text-based phrasing), improved sentence clarity, tense consistency, and removal of typographical errors across headings and body text. Changes
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36-36: Alt text is clear, but consider brevity.The alt text "Landscape of wilderness and mountains in the night full of stars" could be slightly more concise. LanguageTool suggests "in the night" may be redundant—consider "Landscape of wilderness and mountains filled with stars at night" or similar.
75-75: Minor wordiness opportunity in Type section.Line 75 uses "are able to" which could be more concise as "can". This is a stylistic preference and the current version is acceptable.
162-162: Optional: Use "can" instead of "are able to" for conciseness.Line 162 could be shortened from "are able to" to "can" for more direct phrasing. This is a stylistic suggestion.
412-412: GitHub capitalization: "github" should be "GitHub".On line 412, the GitHub platform name should use proper capitalization: "GitHub action" instead of "github action".
394-394: Verify phrasing on line 394.The sentence "As you type, there should be auto-completion for text popup automatically for your IDE" seems awkward with "popup" and "automatically" both appearing. Consider "auto-completion for text appears automatically in your IDE as you type" or similar restructuring for clarity.
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[style] ~36-~36: ‘in the night’ might be wordy. Consider a shorter alternative.
Context: ...="Landscape of wilderness and mountains in the night full of stars" author="saltyaom" ...
(EN_WORDINESS_PREMIUM_IN_THE_NIGHT)
[style] ~58-~58: Consider using a more formal and expressive alternative to ‘amazing’.
Context: ...s of Elysia, as it allows us to do many amazing things like unified typing, syncing you...
(AWESOME)
[style] ~66-~66: Consider using a different verb to strengthen your wording.
Context: ...every Elysia type from the ground up to make Elysia types magnitudes faster. Here's a comparison between 0.6 and 0...
(MAKE_XXX_FASTER)
[style] ~75-~75: As a shorter alternative for ‘able to’, consider using “can”.
Context: ...Script features like const generics, we are able to simplify a lot of our code, reducing ou...
(BE_ABLE_TO)
[style] ~93-~93: To elevate your writing, try using a synonym here.
Context: ...s that can slow down your app, and it's hard to identify them, which is why we intro...
(HARD_TO)
[style] ~162-~162: As a shorter alternative for ‘able to’, consider using “can”.
Context: ...okie Schema and the t.Cookie type, we are able to create a unified type for automatically...
(BE_ABLE_TO)
[style] ~197-~197: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Context: ...cret, you can simply append the secret. Elysia will use the first value to sign new co...
(ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE)
[style] ~215-~215: As a shorter alternative for ‘able to’, consider using “can”.
Context: ...ut with the use of TypeBox's decode, we are able to define a custom function to encode and ...
(BE_ABLE_TO)
[style] ~272-~272: Consider removing “of” to be more concise
Context: ...plugin With this new update, we solved all of the problems above while improving the perf...
(ALL_OF_THE)
[style] ~382-~382: As a shorter alternative for ‘able to’, consider using “can finally”.
Context: ...ing mount and WinterCG compliance, we are finally able to truly encapsulate the instance of the p...
(BE_ABLE_TO)
[grammar] ~394-~394: Ensure spelling is correct
Context: ...here should be auto-completion for text popup automatically for your IDE, whether it'...
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[uncategorized] ~412-~412: The official name of this software platform is spelled with a capital “H”.
Context: ...ithub.com/elysiajs/elysia/pull/179) add github action to run bun test by @arthurfioret...
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14-14: Meta descriptions grammar fix looks good.The insertion of "to" in "Leading to a more solid foundation" corrects a critical grammar error that would have impacted both readability and SEO clarity.
Also applies to: 18-18
41-52: Intro and feature list improvements are solid.The introduction now flows naturally, and feature terminology is standardized (e.g., "WebSocket" capitalization consistency). The list clarity is improved.
54-105: Type and Trace sections have improved clarity.The added context and rephrasing throughout make these technical sections more accessible. Grammar and flow improvements are well executed.
166-166: Grammar improvement: "helping verify" is correct.The change from "helping in verifying" to "helping verify" is grammatically sound and improves clarity.
107-242: Cookie, TypeBox, WebSocket, and Definitions sections are well refined.All editorial improvements enhance clarity and consistency. Terminology is standardized, and the flow is natural throughout these technical sections. No errors detected.
Also applies to: 263-382
384-482: Final sections are well polished.The Afterward and closing sections now flow more naturally with improved tense consistency and readability. The editorial work is comprehensive and appropriate.
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