docs: improve grammar and flow in blog/elysia-11.md

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Summary by CodeRabbit

• Documentation
  • Editorial improvements to blog content, including grammar corrections and spelling fixes.
  • Enhanced readability through rewording and clarification of technical explanations.
  • Standardized terminology and phrasing for consistency across documentation.
  • Improved flow and presentation of written content.

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Walkthrough

Editorial improvements applied to the Elysia 11 blog post, including corrections to grammar, spelling, hyphenation, capitalization, punctuation, and phrasing for enhanced clarity and consistency throughout the document.

Changes

Cohort / File(s)	Change Summary
Editorial corrections docs/blog/elysia-11.md	Grammar, typography, spelling fixes (e.g., "reconcilation" → "reconciliation", "dead lock" → "deadlock"), standardized phrasing for technical terms (OpenTelemetry, Trace v2), improved article and preposition usage, punctuation refinements, capitalization consistency, and minor rewording for clarity and flow.

Estimated code review effort

🎯 1 (Trivial) | ⏱️ ~5–10 minutes

• Single file with purely editorial and cosmetic changes
• No functional logic, code structure, or declarative alterations
• Homogeneous change pattern (consistent grammar/spelling fixes) enables rapid scanning
• May briefly verify technical term consistency and phrasing accuracy in context

Poem

🐰✨ A hop through the prose, fixing word by word—
Where grammar bounds free and clarity's heard!
From typos to hyphens, each sentence now sings,
Elysia's eleven shines bright with such things! 📝🎉

Pre-merge checks and finishing touches

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Title Check	✅ Passed	The pull request title "docs: improve grammar and flow in blog/elysia-11.md" accurately and directly summarizes the main changes in the changeset. The summary confirms that the PR contains editorial corrections focused on grammar fixes, improved clarity, reworded sentences, and overall flow improvements to the blog post file mentioned in the title. The title is concise, specific about the file being modified, and uses clear descriptive language without vague terms or unnecessary noise. A teammate reviewing commit history would immediately understand that this PR improves the written quality of a specific blog post documentation file.

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Actionable comments posted: 1

🧹 Nitpick comments (1)

docs/blog/elysia-11.md (1)

65-65: Consider LanguageTool style suggestions for author preference.

LanguageTool flags a few phrasing opportunities that could enhance the writing without changing meaning:

• Line 65: "It's hard to integrate" → Consider "It's challenging to integrate" or "Integrating OpenTelemetry is difficult"
• Line 663: "I'm still very happy" → Consider "I'm delighted" or "I'm thrilled"
• Line 667: "I'm trying my best to make it better" → Consider "I'm committed to improving it" or "I'm dedicated to its improvement"

These are stylistic preferences; the current phrasing is acceptable. Incorporate only if they align with the author's voice.

Also applies to: 663-663, 667-667

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📥 Commits

Reviewing files that changed from the base of the PR and between 9b68bee and 092dd36.

📒 Files selected for processing (1)

• docs/blog/elysia-11.md (20 hunks)

🧰 Additional context used

🪛 LanguageTool

docs/blog/elysia-11.md

[style] ~65-~65: To elevate your writing, try using a synonym here.
Context: ...instrument your server correctly. It's hard to integrate OpenTelemetry with most ex...

(HARD_TO)

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[style] ~663-~663: As an alternative to the over-used intensifier ‘very’, consider replacing this phrase.
Context: ...on't know how to express it. I'm still very happy to work on Elysia and looking forward t...

(EN_WEAK_ADJECTIVE)

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[style] ~667-~667: The wording of this phrase can be improved.
Context: ...ond to issues but I'm trying my best to make it better and have a vision of what it could be. ...

(MAKE_STYLE_BETTER)

🪛 markdownlint-cli2 (0.18.1)

docs/blog/elysia-11.md

613-613: Unordered list indentation
Expected: 2; Actual: 4

(MD007, ul-indent)

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614-614: Unordered list indentation
Expected: 2; Actual: 4

(MD007, ul-indent)

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615-615: Unordered list indentation
Expected: 2; Actual: 4

(MD007, ul-indent)

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615-615: Hard tabs
Column: 4

(MD010, no-hard-tabs)

🔇 Additional comments (2)

docs/blog/elysia-11.md (2)

14-14: Editorial improvements are well-executed.

The grammar, spelling, hyphenation, and terminology corrections across the document are accurate and enhance clarity without altering technical content. Changes like "reconciliation," "day-one," "deadlock," and "maintenance mode" are all standard corrections that improve consistency and professionalism.

Also applies to: 18-18, 42-42, 44-44, 186-186, 608-608

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1-721: Overall review: Editorial improvements maintain technical accuracy and enhance readability.

The document has been comprehensively edited for grammar, consistency, and clarity. All technical content, code examples, and factual information remain accurate. The changes successfully improve the blog post's professionalism and flow while preserving the author's voice, particularly in the personal closing sections.

Before merging, resolve the formatting violations at lines 613–615 (Markdown indentation and hard tabs).