examples: distributed collective zoo tutorials (steps 12-16) + walkthroughs + CI - #2332
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📝 WalkthroughWalkthroughThe change adds distributed examples for broadcast, allgather, reduce-scatter, all-to-all, and composition. It adds English and Chinese tutorials, updates tutorial indexes, registers navigation entries, and extends simulator CI coverage. ChangesCollective examples and tutorials
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In `@docs/en/user/distributed/18-allgather.md`:
- Around line 93-117: Correct both allgather walkthroughs in
docs/en/user/distributed/18-allgather.md lines 93-117 and
docs/zh/user/distributed/18-allgather.md lines 79-95: describe
builtin_step/LowerCompositeOps as emitting one pld.tile.put per peer followed by
the barrier sequence, returning target; clarify later pl.load calls are local
reads, remove per-peer remote_load and “same schedule” claims, and retain only
the shared rank-indexed row layout.
In `@docs/en/user/distributed/20-all_to_all.md`:
- Around line 133-137: Update the all-to-all documentation to describe the
operation as out-of-place, requiring separate source and target buffers rather
than calling it in-place. Apply the equivalent terminology correction in
docs/en/user/distributed/20-all_to_all.md lines 133-137 and
docs/zh/user/distributed/20-all_to_all.md line 102.
In `@docs/en/user/distributed/21-putting_it_together.md`:
- Around line 6-8: Add 16-allreduce_reveal.md to the prerequisite list in
docs/en/user/distributed/21-putting_it_together.md (lines 6-8) and add the same
localized allreduce prerequisite to
docs/zh/user/distributed/21-putting_it_together.md (line 5); no other changes
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- Around line 95-97: Update the English wording at
docs/en/user/distributed/21-putting_it_together.md lines 95-97 to say the
gathered data came from all ranks instead of three ranks. Apply the equivalent
all-ranks wording at docs/zh/user/distributed/21-putting_it_together.md lines
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@YunjiQin — this is the follow-up to #2330 (tutorial steps 12–16), now out of draft and rebased onto Both points you raised on #2330 apply here, and are fixedThe zoo examples had drifted the same two ways the all-reduce ladder had:
A round of walkthrough correctionsThe automated reviewers found real errors in the 17–21 reveal sections, and checking them against Details are in the two commit messages and in the inline replies. The red check is not this PR
Three runs over identical content:
Same runner produces both outcomes, so it is not host-arch- or runner-related — I had initially suspected #2525 unpinning I have deliberately not touched that file here — widening a tolerance from an unrelated PR would hide the build-nondeterminism question, and the file is not ours. Happy to send a one-line fix on Review whenever suits you. |
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@YunjiQin — correcting my earlier comment on the CI failure. I had the cause right, then talked myself out of it, and the version I posted was wrong in the details. The real answer is documented in this repo and I should have found it sooner. What it actually is. The failing block is a live reproducer for a known simulator-state contamination bug, and
That matches every measurement I took independently — bit-identical worst-case error with a varying mismatch count, Why this PR hit it and others didn't. Fix: rebased onto current Two retractions, so nothing misleading is left standing:
I also opened #2552 to loosen that tolerance and have closed it — it would have accepted the contaminated output and destroyed the signal. Codex caught that; credit where due. Nothing outstanding on this PR from my side. |
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…walkthroughs + CI Steps 12-16 of the distributed teaching ladder: the collective zoo + composition. Four small, golden-validated programs (steps 12-15) each hand-roll a collective from the substrate - broadcast, allgather, reduce_scatter, all_to_all - then reveal its builtin (--mode hand|builtin); step 16 composes broadcast + allreduce + allgather in one kernel. Each step ships a walkthrough page (en + zh) and CI legs at P=2 and P=4. - examples/distributed/12_broadcast.py .. 16_putting_it_together.py: hand-rolled + builtin reveal, golden vs torch with tolerance - docs/en+zh/user/distributed/17-broadcast.md .. 21-putting_it_together.md: one walkthrough per step (The idea -> Run it -> Walkthrough -> Edge cases) - 01-collectives / 02-primitives / 05-tutorials / 12-dynamic_rank_count: shipped marks and cross-links (en + zh) - mkdocs.yml nav entries; examples-tests CI legs for every documented invocation
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Summary
Third PR of the distributed teaching ladder: the collective zoo + composition. Four small, golden-validated programs (steps 12–15) each hand-roll a collective from the substrate — broadcast, allgather, reduce_scatter, all_to_all — then reveal its builtin (
--mode hand|builtin), and step 16 composesbroadcast+allreduce+allgatherin one kernel. Each step ships a walkthrough page (en + zh) and CI legs at P=2 and P=4.Tutorial steps (this PR)
12_broadcast.pypld.tensor.broadcast13_allgather.pypld.tensor.allgather(the all-gather half of two-phase)14_reduce_scatter.pypld.tensor.reduce_scatter(the reduce-scatter half of two-phase)15_all_to_all.pyputa distinct slice per destination, barrier, read back; revealpld.tensor.all_to_all16_putting_it_together.pybroadcast+allreduce+allgatherin one kernel, one signal per collective (a teaching choice)Steps 12–15 build their program from a
(nr, use_builtin)factory; step 16from
(nr). One source serves any P via-d, sim-validated at P=2 and P=4 inboth modes.
Corrections carried over from the #2330 review
Both points Yunji raised on the all-reduce ladder applied here too, and are
fixed in this commit:
factory exists because the
[nr, 1]signal and[nr, SIZE]windows "must bestatically known". None of those is a tile shape, so none forces a
compile-time rank count. Verified rather than argued: every one of the five
was rebuilt with
NR = pl.dynamic("NR")pluspld.nranks(ctx)/pld.world_size()and run at P=4 in both modes — all five compile and passtheir goldens. The real reason 12–15 need a factory is
use_builtin:host_orchbranches on it to choose which per-device orchestrator todispatch, so it must be a Python constant when the body is traced. Step 16
has no mode flag and so no requirement at all; its docstring says so and
notes it could become a module-level program.
converged on:
nranks = pld.nranks(ctx)for kernel loop bounds,pld.world_size()in host orchestration,nrleft only where a shape wantsa literal. The 17–21 snippets (en + zh) are updated to match the source they
quote.
Also repaired three defects that predated the rebase: a spliced
## Suggested reading orderheading in05-tutorials.md(en) that left adangling
ship togetherline and a superseded "12–16 remain planned" sentencecontradicting the table below it, and two stale "steps 08–16 are planned"
pointers in
12-dynamic_rank_count.md(en + zh).Review-round corrections (this PR)
The automated reviewers (Codex, CodeRabbit) found real errors in the 17–21
reveal sections, and checking them against
lower_composite_ops_pass.cppturned up more. All fixed in this commit:
pld.tile.putper peer (row
my_rank), then the barrier — noremote_load. The handversion is a pull with the barrier before the transfer; the builtin pushes
with the barrier after. The page now teaches the diff instead of denying it
(hand:
Premote_loads, self included).prevention before storing into
target[my_rank]). The page advertises theSum contract, not the full
ReduceOpfamily.composites end in
EmitEpilogueReset, so back-to-back reuse of one[nr, 1]signal is safe (tested at P=2 and P=4). The real hazard is sharing one window
across two signal layouts, plus the HOST-builtin-in-a-loop restriction; the
pitfall now says that, and the kernel's three signals are a teaching choice.
(P-1)·N(step 16 pinsmode="mesh"), not thetwo-phase
2·(P-1)/P·N; the cost card now carries the right term.protocol (the "signals do not self-reset" claim was stale).
Docs
docs/en+zh/user/distributed/17-broadcast.md…21-putting_it_together.md— one walkthrough per step (The idea → Run it → Walkthrough → Edge cases →
See also, cost card + fatal-pitfall + three-column debugging table each;
each ships a narrative IR-diff teaching artifact).
docs/en+zh/user/distributed/05-tutorials.md— steps 12–16 marked ✅ shipped;the full 16-step ladder now ships together.
01-collectives.md§Runnable Examples (broadcast/allgather/reduce_scatter/all_to_all rows → the walkthroughs),
02-primitives.mdshipped note; the all_to_all page links
03-execution.md,examples/runtime/distributed_callback.py, and the pypto-lib applications(AllGather-GEMM feat(codegen): Enable a2a3 up/down split cross-core pipe codegen #869, distributed MoE) by name.
mkdocs.yml— nav entries for 17–21.CI
examples-testsgains the legs for steps 12–16: P=2 default(loop), P=2 builtin reveal, and P=4 in both modes — every documented
invocation is CI-validated.
mkdocs build --strict) green.Verification
a2a3sim(P=2 andP=4, hand and builtin), goldens vs torch with tolerance — re-run after the
rank-count change, not just before it.
pre-commit(22 hooks) andmkdocs build --strictclean on the squashedhead
78dfb505.-p a2a3 -d 0,1,2,3) viatask-submitwhere available; else 2-card + sim-P=4 evidence.