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Great work on this task! Your solution correctly implements all the functional requirements, calculating and displaying the total and average population perfectly. I am approving your submission. Please take a look at the build logs, as there's a linting error about an unused variable: error 'pop' is assigned a value but never used. You also have another unused variable, spaned, which can be removed to clean up the code. As a suggestion for future improvement, you can make your code even more concise by removing the manual counter i and using the length property of your element collection instead. Keep up the excellent work!
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This manual counter i isn't necessary. You can get the number of population elements directly from the length property of the clazz collection (i.e., clazz.length). This would allow you to remove this variable and the i++ inside your loop, making the code simpler.
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These variables, spaned and pop, are declared but never used. It's good practice to remove unused code to keep your script clean and easier to read.
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This counter variable i isn't necessary. The clazz object is a collection that has a .length property, which you can use to get the count of elements. You could calculate the average after the loop with total / clazz.length and remove i and i++ completely.
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Excellent work on this pull request! You've successfully addressed the feedback from the previous review by removing the unused variables, making your code cleaner and more efficient. Your solution now meets all the requirements of the task, correctly calculating and displaying the population data. I am happy to approve your submission. Keep up the great work!
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