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…e minor edits.

On the Windows download page and macOS download page:

Transform the paragraph of items included in the EDB installer into a list for readability.
Split a long sentence in two.
Trim some wordiness/redundancies.
Remove italics around “Advanced users”.
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<h1><span class="text-lowercase">mac</span>OS packages <img class="logo" src="/media/img/apple.png" alt="Apple Logo" /></h1>

<p>You can get macOS PostgreSQL packages from several different sources.</p>
<p>You can get macOS PostgreSQL packages from several sources.</p>

<h2>Interactive installer by EDB</h2>

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</p>

<p>
This installer includes the PostgreSQL server, pgAdmin; a graphical tool for managing and developing
your databases, and StackBuilder; a package manager that can be used to download and install
additional PostgreSQL tools and drivers. Stackbuilder includes management,
integration, migration, replication, geospatial, connectors and other tools.
This installer includes:
</p>

<ul>
<li>The PostgreSQL server</li>
<li>pgAdmin, a graphical tool for managing and developing your databases</li>
<li>StackBuilder, a package manager for downloading and installing
additional PostgreSQL tools and drivers. Stackbuilder includes management,
integration, migration, replication, geospatial, connectors and other tools.</li>
</ul>

<p>
This installer can run in graphical, command line, or silent install modes.
</p>

<p>
The installer is designed to be a straightforward, fast way to get up and running with
PostgreSQL on macOS, however in the unlikely event that you do have any issues with
the installers, please report them on the <a href="https://github.com/EnterpriseDB/edb-installers/issues">
The macOS installer is designed to be a straightforward, fast way to get up and running with
PostgreSQL. In the unlikely event that you have issues with the installer,
please report them on the <a href="https://github.com/EnterpriseDB/edb-installers/issues">
installer Github page</a>. Issues with the installed packages should be reported to the
appropriate project directly.
</p>

<p>
<em>Advanced users</em> can also download a
Advanced users can also download a
<a href="https://www.enterprisedb.com/download-postgresql-binaries">zip archive</a>
of the binaries, without the installer.
This download is intended for users who wish to include PostgreSQL as part of another application installer.
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<a href="mailto:[email protected]">[email protected]</a>.
</p>

<p>This installer includes the PostgreSQL server, pgAdmin; a graphical tool for managing and developing
your databases, and StackBuilder; a package manager that can be used to download and install
additional PostgreSQL tools and drivers. Stackbuilder includes management,
integration, migration, replication, geospatial, connectors and other tools.
<p>
This installer includes:
</p>

<ul>
<li>The PostgreSQL server</li>
<li>pgAdmin, a graphical tool for managing and developing your databases</li>
<li>StackBuilder, a package manager for downloading and installing
additional PostgreSQL tools and drivers. Stackbuilder includes management,
integration, migration, replication, geospatial, connectors and other tools.</li>
</ul>

<p>
This installer can run in graphical or silent install modes.
</p>

<p>
The installer is designed to be a straightforward, fast way to get up and running with
PostgreSQL on Windows, however in the unlikely event that you do have any issues with
the installers, please report them on the <a href="https://github.com/EnterpriseDB/edb-installers/issues">
The Windows installer is designed to be a straightforward, fast way to get up and running with
PostgreSQL. In the unlikely event that you have issues with the installer,
please report them on the <a href="https://github.com/EnterpriseDB/edb-installers/issues">
installer Github page</a>. Issues with the installed packages should be reported to the
appropriate project directly.
</p>

<p>
<em>Advanced users</em> can also download a
Advanced users can also download a
<a href="https://www.enterprisedb.com/download-postgresql-binaries">zip archive</a>
of the binaries, without the installer.
This download is intended for users who wish to include PostgreSQL as part of another application installer.
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