Milk-V Pioneer: RevyOS Test Report#381
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20251030 TestReport
Reviewer's GuideIntroduces a comprehensive, bilingual test report for the RevyOS Pioneer platform, detailing environment setup, installation steps, test results, and logs in both English and Chinese. File-Level Changes
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Hey there - I've reviewed your changes - here's some feedback:
- Align the metadata sys_ver (20251030) with the "Operating System Information" section (currently listing 20241230) to avoid version confusion.
- Fix typos and grammar in the install steps (e.g., change “fist-time” to “first-time” and “needs to update your firmware” to “need to update your firmware”).
- Consider adding checksum (e.g., SHA256) verification instructions for downloaded firmware and images to ensure file integrity.
Prompt for AI Agents
Please address the comments from this code review:
## Overall Comments
- Align the metadata sys_ver (20251030) with the "Operating System Information" section (currently listing 20241230) to avoid version confusion.
- Fix typos and grammar in the install steps (e.g., change “fist-time” to “first-time” and “needs to update your firmware” to “need to update your firmware”).
- Consider adding checksum (e.g., SHA256) verification instructions for downloaded firmware and images to ensure file integrity.
## Individual Comments
### Comment 1
<location> `Pioneer/RevyOS/README_20251030.md:32` </location>
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+### Flashing Firmware
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+#### SD card (suggest for fist-time)
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+Get the firmware and flash to the SD card:
</code_context>
<issue_to_address>
**issue (typo):** Typo: 'fist-time' should be 'first-time'.
```suggestion
#### SD card (suggest for first-time)
```
</issue_to_address>
### Comment 2
<location> `Pioneer/RevyOS/README_20251030.md:66` </location>
<code_context>
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+```bash
+zstd -d /path/to/revyos-pioneer-20251030-004123.img.zst
+dd if=/path/to/revyos-pioneer-20251030-004123.img.zst of=/dev/yout-device bs=4M status=progress
+```
+
</code_context>
<issue_to_address>
**issue (typo):** Typo: 'yout-device' should be 'your-device'.
Update the dd command to use '/dev/your-device' instead of '/dev/yout-device'.
```suggestion
dd if=/path/to/revyos-pioneer-20251030-004123.img.zst of=/dev/your-device bs=4M status=progress
```
</issue_to_address>
### Comment 3
<location> `Pioneer/RevyOS/README_20251030_zh.md:16` </location>
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+- Milk-V Pioneer Box v1.3
+- microSD 卡一张
+- NMVE SSD 及硬盘盒
+- HDMI 线 + 显示器
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</code_context>
<issue_to_address>
**issue (typo):** Typo: 'NMVE' should be 'NVME'.
Update the spelling to 'NVME' to ensure technical accuracy.
```suggestion
- NVME SSD 及硬盘盒
```
</issue_to_address>
### Comment 4
<location> `Pioneer/RevyOS/README_20251030_zh.md:58` </location>
<code_context>
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+```bash
+zstd -d /path/to/revyos-pioneer-20251030-004123.img.zst
+dd if=/path/to/revyos-pioneer-20251030-004123.img.zst of=/dev/yout-device bs=4M status=progress
+```
+
</code_context>
<issue_to_address>
**issue (typo):** Typo: 'yout-device' should be 'your-device'.
Update the dd command to use '/dev/your-device' instead of '/dev/yout-device'.
```suggestion
dd if=/path/to/revyos-pioneer-20251030-004123.img.zst of=/dev/your-device bs=4M status=progress
```
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issue (typo): Typo: 'fist-time' should be 'first-time'.
| #### SD card (suggest for fist-time) | |
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| ```bash | ||
| zstd -d /path/to/revyos-pioneer-20251030-004123.img.zst | ||
| dd if=/path/to/revyos-pioneer-20251030-004123.img.zst of=/dev/yout-device bs=4M status=progress |
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issue (typo): Typo: 'yout-device' should be 'your-device'.
Update the dd command to use '/dev/your-device' instead of '/dev/yout-device'.
| dd if=/path/to/revyos-pioneer-20251030-004123.img.zst of=/dev/yout-device bs=4M status=progress | |
| dd if=/path/to/revyos-pioneer-20251030-004123.img.zst of=/dev/your-device bs=4M status=progress |
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| - Milk-V Pioneer Box v1.3 | ||
| - microSD 卡一张 | ||
| - NMVE SSD 及硬盘盒 |
There was a problem hiding this comment.
issue (typo): Typo: 'NMVE' should be 'NVME'.
Update the spelling to 'NVME' to ensure technical accuracy.
| - NMVE SSD 及硬盘盒 | |
| - NVME SSD 及硬盘盒 |
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| ```bash | ||
| zstd -d /path/to/revyos-pioneer-20251030-004123.img.zst | ||
| dd if=/path/to/revyos-pioneer-20251030-004123.img.zst of=/dev/yout-device bs=4M status=progress |
There was a problem hiding this comment.
issue (typo): Typo: 'yout-device' should be 'your-device'.
Update the dd command to use '/dev/your-device' instead of '/dev/yout-device'.
| dd if=/path/to/revyos-pioneer-20251030-004123.img.zst of=/dev/yout-device bs=4M status=progress | |
| dd if=/path/to/revyos-pioneer-20251030-004123.img.zst of=/dev/your-device bs=4M status=progress |
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| ### Operating System Information | ||
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| - System Version: RevyOS 20241230 |
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| - System Version: RevyOS 20251030 |
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Summary by Sourcery
Add detailed test report documentation for RevyOS Pioneer 20251030 in English and Chinese
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