Merge pull request #514 from w3c/simoneonofri-fedid-deliverables

[wg/fedid] Update Deliverables

2024/wg-fedid.html

@@ -204,7 +204,7 @@ <h2>
         Deliverables
       </h2>
 
-      <p>Updated document status is available on the <a href="https://www.w3.org/groups/wg/fedid/publications">group
+      <p>The updated document status is available on the <a href="https://www.w3.org/groups/wg/fedid/publications">group
           publication status page</a>.</p>
 
       <p><i>Draft state</i> indicates the state of the deliverable at the time of the charter approval.
@@ -236,8 +236,8 @@ <h3>
           </dt>
           <dd>
             <p>This specification defines an API to inform the Web Application of their user's
-              login status, so that other Web APIs can operate with this additional signal. Currently a separate
-            chapter in the <a href="#fedcm">FedCM specification</a>, the goal is to publish it as a separate deliverable to be used by
+              login status, so that other Web APIs can operate with this additional signal. Currently, it is a separate
+            chapter in the <a href="#fedcm">FedCM specification</a>, and the goal is to publish it as a separate deliverable to be used by
             <abbr title="Federated Credential Management">FedCM</abbr>.</p>
 
             <p class="draft-status"><b>Draft state:</b> <a href="https://github.com/fedidcg/FedCM">Adopted from the